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5/17/2013 2:07:31 AM
Nato Calubiran
Posts: 23
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Story little boy who
Who's in love with you
Wants to be together
Wants to be with you forever.
I like your style
I like your smile
I like who you are
For me you're my star.
As the autumn breezes
And all the cold wishes
The leaves just keep on falling.
We keep on parting
We keep on fleeting
The past is far gone.
ELA
Would you remember me
Little boy blue
A little boy who loved you.
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