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5/16/2013 8:35:30 PM
Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
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Hurting you wasn't my intention
For me to keep sanity
My spirit halted me with anintervention
You're a shot in the dark
Our minds are galaxies apart
Too much conflict
While I disliked it,
You seem to be an addict
I'm more content
Finding less and less to vent
My battles are fought by me
Your battles are an Odyssey
Clash of the Titans, Greek mythology
Too much drama for me
I'll retreat while you cry to yourmomma
Hopefully peace and happiness find youtomorrow
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