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5/14/2013 9:31:25 PM

Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
The Darkness is coming again--
And I can see no end.
My Jealous-Hate is tapping at the door...
It is crying--
Can you hear it--
It is crying for something more

If there be Light at the end of this Night--
Still the Loneliness will not

The Darkness is coming--
Can you hear it--
It is coming again,
And I can see no end
edited by Gabe on 5/14/2013
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