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5/14/2013 9:31:25 PM
Gabe Shelly Posts: 95
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The Darkness is coming again-- And I can see no end. My Jealous-Hate is tapping at the door... It is crying-- Can you hear it-- It is crying for something more
If there be Light at the end of this Night-- Still the Loneliness will not
The Darkness is coming-- Can you hear it-- It is coming again, And I can see no end edited by Gabe on 5/14/2013
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