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5/14/2013 4:48:16 PM

Teresa Lindsay
Posts: 16
Lying back on the green grass of spring
Watching the late afternoon sun set
The sky ablaze with bright reds and oranges
Breeze softly whispering in my ear
Fireflys lighting the early evening
Tree frogs craoking, crickets chirping
Birds singing their last songs
Hearing the creek gentlely moving
Day fading into the night stars appear
Twinking far above my head, brightly
Moon sloftly glowing, showing me it's face
What a way to end the day, not a worry in mind.
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