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5/14/2013 4:41:32 PM

Joanne Hayward
Posts: 2
I am caught in a current
I am trapped in a tide

I struggle to escape

from the anguish inside.




Once I walked on a ledge

of uncertainty and doubt,

Now I plummet to Earth

but never find the ground.




I am splintered with glass,

I am stuck with a knife,

Shards pierce my heart,

I am drained of life.




I am tortured by hope,

I am betrayed by fear,

It hurts to accept

I am the only one here.
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