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5/6/2013 9:47:13 PM

Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
There we are--
Lost-- all of us--
No longer able to speak that unwritten language--
Sentenced to camps and environments unknown--
We are the stupid Jews.

The mentally disabled
edited by Gabe on 5/7/2013
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