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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
4/25/2013 10:16:52 PM

Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
There is a strength not understood--
Something taught that we never should--
To cease this and end the searching--
For the purpose has turned to less--
And life you can no longer 2nd guess

Welcome the Jungle
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