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4/10/2013 11:00:16 AM

Teresa Lindsay
Posts: 16
Across the miles my heart cries for a love to call its own.
Over the ocean sodeep and blue my soul looks for you.
Thru time and spacemy mind wonders
Looking for allthoughts of you.
Day by day I see your smiling face
In pictures till I know every line.
Night by night in my dreams I am in your arms.
As the sun rises andshadows disappear
Tears stream down my face as I find it only a dream.
I long for sleep to linger on so I don't lose you
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