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4/6/2013 12:10:59 PM

cheung shun sang
Posts: 24

Buzz…
Get a buzz and real as come.
Deaths with fouls will play as claim.
Words of buzz are argots piles.
Tyrants boxed our life as times.

Words that rude are swear that bad.
Bleeding souls are all so wet.
Oh must you a dirty mouth.
I am clean and good at mounts.

So I am clean and noting harm.
Dirty mouths you dip by arts.
Keep my stick and you must down.
Alpha male is me that calm.

Goals and horns are champagne flutes.
Fluxes that change are killing fools.
Made excited are Towns to goals.
Me is me are hot or cold.

I can love the basely P.L.A. goals.
Pick her goalie cherry close.
China double agent strips.
Smooth and tender all are lips.

Kiss is kiss and still we can.
Dip and flee are moist with lands.
Venus mounts have camel toes.
Read her contour all are poems.
--------------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3------------

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