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4/2/2013 2:45:13 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Lies Lies Lies
In the passengers seat There's only an arm rest between us Why does it feel like a big vast sea Your lies sink like a million fishhooks You find small innocent victims, Shred their insides And leave them for bait You lies could paint the titanic withstains
You have no meat Your eyes no soul If I jump in Jog for miles and miles All I'd find is open road
To think I used to be impressed I wanted to be like you Your best gift? Giving me existence another attitude
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