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3/25/2013 11:04:46 AM
Dane Leong
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If there is any good that exists,
bad must be alongside it.
If there is ever an option for good,
bad will always be decided.
Why is it, that bad is the only choice,
and good is always doubted?
Is it that bad is considered strength,
and good weakness?
It is that good is misunderstood,
and therefore used less.
If bad is the victor,
does good give up vying?
If good cannot conquer,
is there a point in trying?
Do not lose faith,
good can sometimes win.
Tis just the way of life,
that bad must happen.
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3/25/2013 11:08:55 AM
Dane Leong
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This is my first time posting a poem. I've just now started to get a little more involved with poetry so whatever critique you have for me be it good or bad I'll really appreciate it. Thanks
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