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1/25/2013 10:36:53 AM

Get down get down fairy moon,
Why you stay there all alone.
Get down get down fairy moon,
Sing a song in pretty tone.
Swing my baby up and down,
Put him to sleep very soon.
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2/24/2013 4:48:21 PM

Issac Guzman
Posts: 1
The canary's harpoon, on Fairy Moon,
Is harbored within the dairy saloon.

That cause one to get hairy soon,
From the dubloon's monsoon.

Sedentary broom,
Sweeped in the emissary's room.

As it barely looms,
& mushrooms rarely bloom.
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