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1/24/2013 9:29:48 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Everyone has something to say
About a day and they're not payingtheir way

I got something so say too
It's gonna be my way, nothing else willdo

Is jealousy the ugliest color orcontrol
I've made my decisions you can say nomore

Remember that karma exists
I'm just as capable of being a witch

Your threats don't scare me
Your the grain of pepper in my nose
Shoot ya out like a cannon,
Here comes the sneeze!
edited by svlynn18 on 1/24/2013
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