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12/6/2012 1:43:36 PM


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If I thought for a minute,
that you could change,
I'd keep you by my side
for all times.


Blackened silence beckons
you, drawing you closer,
closer still.
Leaving me behind


To the point of
no return,
no scream
pierces the black night


The strength I lack,
to pull you back,
haunts me,
to this day.
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12/21/2012 12:06:06 PM

Caitlin Dwinnell
Posts: 4
Your poem was deep and dark. I really enjoyed the tone.
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