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11/29/2012 1:42:14 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Nose and ears clogged like a showerdrain
Sinus drainage feels like honey runningdown a beehive
Red dry skin surrounds my nostrils,
The cough is an ab flexor
I'll cough up some honey
Then think, man,
It'd be awesome if this was worth money
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