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11/21/2012 6:36:56 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Like the weather it seems stormy orbright
When the sadness arrives I know
I'll never have what could have been
So many things I'd like to say
Wouldn't matter at the end of the day
I'll just close my eyes
There will always be a dream tucked inbed
Daydreams of the special love
Will always trickle in my head
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