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11/4/2012 1:32:33 PM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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What I have to say does matter I intend to serve it on a silver platter If you think I'm gonna sit and hide I'll have to kiss your curdled booty goodbye
Not a sleeve you can tuck away I do a lot of work and contribute everyday Recommend I keep an aspirin between my legs? Maybe you outta keep your men out of American Pies!
You're pretending to be stuck in the 40s man You're trying the be a magnet to older crowd I'll do what I can to make sure it bites you in the ass Your respect barometer for women is down,
Just looking at you I get a seedy feeling I picture you in a Vegas strip at a VIP Lounge Taking advantage of troubled ladies stamped with hearts that are bleeding You'll make sure you apply first aide Enter a contract to give her one hell of a bonus on every payday! edited by svlynn18 on 11/4/2012
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