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11/4/2012 1:03:57 AM
Justin Benassi Posts: 4
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The room in the corner, With its three wood doors, Each heavier than before, A subtle air not of fear, Patient vents waiting to hear,
Clenching at the scent, Umbrage and stale paint, Taste of turpentine and taint , Dust gracefully composed, Large eraser shards in throws,
Senile light made rent, Lingering weight of lead, Below a layered graphite bed, Glows like the antithesis of chrome, A shallow doom drawn in monotone. edited by Kotzo on 11/4/2012
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