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10/29/2012 7:48:02 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Citizens of the world Emotional turmoil is exploding like aVolcanic eruption About 50% of you are broke and unemployed Thanks to greed and corporate corruption This month it's either eat or pay bills Food is the best medicine for most, hunger kills Eventually, hopefully, one day, someone will erase the bottom line A hurricane of triumph mimic a large magical wind chime Quality Assurance will mean something,not just a chart Change will become more normal, not just a shot in the dark
Work in progress, ideas please? edited by svlynn18 on 10/29/2012
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