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10/24/2012 2:26:14 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Why do people have love affairs withmoney?
It will never hug you and call youhoney!
It's something that will come and go
If that's used to keep life balanced,
I really hope you don't loose your bigtoe
When it's all gone and your staring atyour last wall
Will you think about your fortune 500brand in a picture down the hall?
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