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10/20/2012 3:38:55 AM
That bottle of booze might be old news
But it never kept you from me
Your addiction switched from alcohol toher
She's tricked you to think I'm an evillittle girl
Possessed with her looks and mind
You had no problem leaving my existencebehind
Too much for you, shutting the doorseemed like the easiest choice
I hope every day for the the rest ofyour life you hear this child's voice
How does it feel to know you're notthere
When you look at her,
Does she have enough happiness to share
I can't imagine yours is real
So she'd have to have more than enoughto steal
For you to get by and fake
Your okay with your choices and yourfate
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