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10/18/2012 7:18:57 PM

Salvador Lopez
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Living in a world where poverty exist,

My way of living will put you in a mental twist!

In and out of correctional facilities,

Cant seem to deal with life's difficulties!

I've been placed in isolation many times,

That was my punishment for committing crimes!

When will I grow up and finally learn,

That we live in a life where there's nowhere else to turn!

We have to stand up and make a change,

Live life without having so much rage!

So I have to sit here and evaluate my contribution to my community,

Be of service to my fellows with humility!
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10/18/2012 7:19:21 PM

Salvador Lopez
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What kind of poem is this related too
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