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10/11/2012 10:37:56 PM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17 		Typing my way to big money;
take a break, she says, honey.
Does not she realize or understand;
inching closer to that cashout is at hand.
Scimping and scraping each value;
to buy a ring or go out to eat, is what I pursue.

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