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10/7/2012 11:36:04 AM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17
ROSE ROSE LET HER KNOW JUST HOW I LOVE HER SO;
GIVE ME POWER AND WISDOM MY FEELINGS TO HER I WANT TO GROW.
SHE CARES FOR ME IN SO MANY WAYS I SEE;
DEAR GOD ANSWER MY PLEA.
EGO AND PRIDE I SEE IS AT THE ROOT;
I DRED THE DAY WHEN SHE GETS ENOUGH AND GIVES ME THE BOOT.
WITH THIS GAL I DO WISH TO BE;
TO SHARE MY DREAMS, LIFE, AND REALITY.
IT’S BEEN A LONG HARD STRUGGLE OF A ROAD;
SHE AND I JOINED TOGETHER IN THE FOLD.
I HAVE IN THE PAST WISHED FOR THE END;
AN ISLAND I WAS ONE WITHOUT A FRIEND.
CAME TO ME SHE DID ONE DAY;
TOOK MY HAND TO GET TO KNOW ME SHE DID SAY.
THIS ONE THING OF LOVE I DO KNOW FOR SURE;
I COULD NOT AND WOULD NOT DENY HER LURE.
THANX TO THE SKY AND TO THE MAN ABOVE;
WANTED I THOUGHT AN EAGLE BUT WOUND UP WITH A DOVE.

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