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10/7/2012 8:45:29 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
I believe in love,
Not in you

You've hurt a lot of people
That's something no superhero would do

Wimpy attempts prove one thing
You're desire for my love has nohonesty

Did your time
Escaped you grind

Whatever is left behind
A toy maker can fix and polish to shine
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