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10/7/2012 8:45:29 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
I believe in love,
Not in you


You've hurt a lot of people
That's something no superhero would do


Wimpy attempts prove one thing
You're desire for my love has nohonesty


Did your time
Escaped you grind


Whatever is left behind
A toy maker can fix and polish to shine
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