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10/7/2012 8:45:29 AM
Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
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I believe in love,
Not in you
You've hurt a lot of people
That's something no superhero would do
Wimpy attempts prove one thing
You're desire for my love has nohonesty
Did your time
Escaped you grind
Whatever is left behind
A toy maker can fix and polish to shine
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