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10/6/2012 8:55:56 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
This month needs to be done,
Campaigning everywhere
Romney sucks, Obama number one
The T.V At Firestone is on, I start tostare,
During commercial break politicianshave lies to declare
Drama Drama more Drama
No wonder people are mad,
Watching this daily, I'd wake up sad
Signs on lawns,
They make us all feel like chess pawns
At least in the game of life you canpass “go”
Guaranteed payday except for inmates ondeath row
The celebrities should bind togetherand buy the country
At least then, we can hear commercialsabout Bounty
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