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10/6/2012 8:43:26 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Filled with anger
Or lost hope, can't decide.
Running into you, I'd be back at
Ground zero
In my best interest to let it go, butits
Very difficult when my
Ego gets in the way. I want an apologyfirst,
Nothing else. I don't care if you were to begor plead. It's
Easy to show up and say you've changed.
Somehow I wouldn't believe you
Shows I'm not ready to forgive you
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