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10/3/2012 8:07:38 AM
Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133
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Occasionally I cry
Overwhelming joy
Sadness is deprived
Seems Surreal
I found the real deal
I feel almost guilty
Like it's a steal
Must have been a saint in a past life
I'll soon be lucky enough to be his wife
edited by svlynn18 on 10/3/2012
edited by svlynn18 on 10/3/2012
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