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10/3/2012 6:17:37 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
I can imagine hundreds of ways,
I know it can happen at any time,
Dust will take you, part of me will die

When we're together
Having a good time,
I treasure the moments you're at my side
Until eternity begins, I never want to say goodbye
edited by svlynn18 on 10/3/2012
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