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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
9/30/2012 12:13:50 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Assume you have to ask questions and you Can mess up. You Can apologize and make it up by Offering to help Understand a problem and Never pretend to empathize. Just Treat people right
Ask to hear both sides of a story Before making one evil, another inheriting all glory Illustrate what you preach Learn why things work Indecisiveness needs to stop, make up your mind Trials and tribulations will test your character, Yield happiness and calm, life will be a delight.
Im not used to writing this form. Feedback, feedback, and more feedback! edited by svlynn18 on 9/30/2012
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