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9/19/2012 6:31:03 AM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133

Hundreds of hours for a momentsexposure,
When so many doubt you, passions lift helps composure,

Make sure shop looks fit,
nice and neat,
Bottles straight,
service cant be beat

Customers walk in
always greeted with JOY
Go the extra mile
No strings attached or extra ploys,

40 hour workweek?
Haha, that's for wimps,
Following a dream makes happiness,
That's a hard concept to grip

Financial stability,
At some point it hits,
The Pros always manage,
They tread along with the grit

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