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9/14/2012 7:10:30 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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It's different when your just lookingin, I wish I could provide you details. But my gut tells me you're not genuine
I'm sure you could offer me advise, Supposed if I took it my life wouldsuffice, That's not good enough for me, My heart is my only true guidingdevice,
There are so many pliable rules, I want a sturdy guaranteed, If you cant provide that for me, Just please, let this conversation be
Over and over and over and over I see what people think.... I'm young, I'm nieve, Sweet, Dating a deadbeat,
We'll wait and see...only time willtell, Who and how you gonna handle the treatsdestiny has on heat. edited by svlynn18 on 9/14/2012
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