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5/24/2024 6:01:43 AM Christine Morota Posts: 1	"I Am a Woman, Not Just a Woman" We were known for being feminine, but femininity is not being too sensitive. It's a serious talk about facts, that all of us should think positive. We always get belittled, so woman should fight and be active! We have weaknesses, but can be turned as our strengths to survive There are many things that we can do, even carrying a life So what are you going to do? love the person for being the reason why you're alive We aren't recognized before a woman who's strong and independent Slave, naive, a coward and a trash, that is how women being treated Men are powerful. They are physically strong and being recognized as brave, intelligent and can do anything they wanted But now we are equal, say yes, to women empowerment! Women had sacrificed many things even their wants and needs But being silenced for having no right to speak Is this how our society should be? No equality? Pride and a man should lead? We are essential, a woman should be loved and protected Not being raped, abused and molested. Women's capabilities has enhanced society's development Here comes revolution of women empowerment I am a WOMAN, not JUST A WOMAN Let us also be heard through HERstory Let's be fair and do not only rely on HIStory Because God created this world with man and a woman edited by StalwartDull on 5/24/2024
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5/30/2024 9:03:10 AM Bob Atkinson Posts: 295	Not poetry's place to determine what is or isn't. That's a misuse of the genre'. Poetry IS "the emotional content of literature." An exploration of our reaction to what is or isn't. The verb "to be" is, are, was, were shouldn't be utilized in poetry as it defeats poetry's purpose: We WERE known for BEING feminine, but femininity IS notBEING too sensitive. IT’S a serious talk about facts,that all of us should think positive. We always getbelittled, so woman should fight and BE active! Wehave weaknesses, but can BE turned as our strengths to survive ThereARE many things that we can do, even carrying a life Sowhat ARE you going to do? love the person for being thereason why YOU’RE alive We AREN’Trecognized before a woman WHO’S strong and independent Slave,naive, a coward and a trash, that IS how women being treated Menare powerful. They ARE physically strong and beingrecognized as brave, intelligent and can do anything theywanted But now we ARE equal, say yes, towomen empowerment! Women had sacrificed many things eventheir wants and needs But BEING silenced for having noright to speak Is this how our society should BE? Noequality? Pride and a man should lead? WeARE essential, a woman should BE loved and protected NotBEING raped, abused and molested. Women's capabilities hasenhanced society's development Here comes revolution ofwomen empowerment I am a WOMAN, not JUSTA WOMAN Let us also BE heard through HERstory Let'sBE fair and do not only rely on HIStory Because Godcreated this world with man and a woman p { line-height: 115%; margin-bottom: 0.1in; background: transparent }
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