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8/16/2012 1:42:50 PM
Im in a better mood today,
Remembered something important,
Feeling life is more than living a day,
Honoring and maintaining you is thebest way.
Running in circles is the worst lifeprogram,
lets break out some crafts and make anew diagram,
Must review the old crap, scribble itout, but never erase,
Learning from history, you can embracethe future's taste,
Look at your goals,
How many points have you scored?
You're looking to start new records,
Change your attitude, you'll do muchbetter,
If you're negative,
you must retrain your brain,
Turn that energy into somethingpositive,
Otherwise you'll continue to driveeveryone insane,
World is full of too many that turntheir heads,
Maybe that why you don't get a goodnights sleep when your in bed,
Toss and turn, toss and turn, kick,whatever else comes to you,
time for a new routine, something isbothering you,
Do what you feel makes you count,
Never too late for a rebound,
Don't let others get you down,
If you want it badly,
You're triumphs will make them frown
They'll give dirty looks,
But when you open your mouth...
They wont say **** to you.
You've done something they've failed todo
Recognized the potential you got inyou!
edited by svlynn18 on 8/17/2012
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