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4/30/2024 12:57:07 AM

Elaine DVC
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The Palm in One’s Heart
It's a heartwarming and loving memory.

There’s a glow in one’s face,
As one looks at these roads
Traces this memorable place
And reminisce about the unforgettable day.

Remembering then the flowers swayed in the air,
With varieties of colors; blooming everywhere
Pine trees so high, numerous as ever,
It made this place so cool and tender.

Walking along this sloping hillside
One's heart beat fast, as they stood side by side
Within smiles, happiness and peace linger
They gazed at each other, seemingly speechless.

Sitting on this lovely bench,
With drops of rain drench
Telling stories that amazed oneself
Enjoying one another seems endless.

At last, you turned to one and gazed deeply
Lifted one’s hand, and caressed it gently,
Put thy hand in your heart
And close your eyes slowly.

Poem Style: Free Verse

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