You have an ad blocker! We understand, but...
PoetrySoup is a small privately owned website. Our means of support comes from advertising revenue. We want to keep PoetrySoup alive, make it better, and keep it free. Please support us by disabling your ad blocker
on PoetrySoup. See how to enable ads
while keeping your ad blocker active. Thank you!
For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
8/13/2012 10:44:29 PM
It's date night,
in the car, going to the movies,
I begin to cry,
Try to hold back,
cant fight the insides,
salt, salt, and more salt covers my cheeks,
Want to see this movie,
spend time with my man
...this will pass in a minute,
Don't want to wreck happy times,
I've been holding it in,
Holding it in too long,
somethings is definitely wrong,
I admit defeat,
signs on the freeway seem weak,
I'm trying to sidetrack myself,
make this stop,
my sadness keeps coming out on top,
why now, why not later,
why is he ruining this,I don't like this behavior,
this is what happens when I ignore the obvious,
He'll be with me for life...I'll never get over his bite.
edited by svlynn18 on 8/14/2012
• reply with quote
Powered by AspNetForum
© 2006-2010 Jitbit Software