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8/13/2012 8:49:59 AM

femi joey oloidi
Posts: 13

Yes!
they all frown and clown to know that
you are the crown that makes the gown of my happiness longer
this makes my soul itch in love,
when you are with me,
not with me,
and forever with me

Yes!
they all frown and clown to know that
you are the speedometer of my heart
and that you are always right in between the cabinet of my chest

Yes!
I am now crowned and gowned up,
to know that,
she simply makes my heart gracefully dance and glance happily at those who think that I am a fool in love

Yes!
Let them frown and clown on
with their thorny crowns of ignorance

For all I know and row in
is that she is my lord of admiration
and I love her supremely delicately
for she is always there for little me

So let them frown and clown on
edited by king femi on 8/13/2012

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