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8/13/2012 8:49:59 AM
femi joey oloidi Posts: 13
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Yes! they all frown and clown to know that you are the crown that makes the gown of my happiness longer this makes my soul itch in love, when you are with me, not with me, and forever with me Yes! they all frown and clown to know that you are the speedometer of my heart and that you are always right in between the cabinet of my chest Yes! I am now crowned and gowned up, to know that, she simply makes my heart gracefully dance and glance happily at those who think that I am a fool in love
Yes! Let them frown and clown on with their thorny crowns of ignorance For all I know and row in is that she is my lord of admiration and I love her supremely delicately for she is always there for little me
So let them frown and clown on edited by king femi on 8/13/2012
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