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8/11/2012 6:49:41 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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When the water from the sky meets the water from the sprinklers, they create little water babies! Sometimes I find them playing on my dogs whiskers, She shakes them off but they'll come again, Grumbling electric skies of summer, never want you to end! edited by svlynn18 on 8/11/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 8/11/2012 edited by svlynn18 on 8/11/2012
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