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4/16/2024 8:15:41 AM
Zarek Brewer
Posts: 7
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Leaving is hard
It burns you inside
As you leave what you know and behind
Nobody wants to leave what they love
Nor do they want to let go.
When I left,I hugged my friends,
Never to see them again.
Because leaving is hard
But returning is harder
So I'd rather it be the end.
Sorry this one's kinda corny :P
edited by thesaddestpoet on 4/16/2024
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