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7/31/2012 9:01:07 AM
Luis Martinez-Rivera
Posts: 5
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Jubilation!
What wonderful ovation,
granted-
complete isolation.
Vanity's course-
remorse!
Fickle style,
shallow- while,
surrounded by the senile.
Sanity wonder not,
life is begot.
Once more
towards the door-
forever deplore-
This World,
hurled-
Once more-
World mature.
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