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3/22/2024 10:30:36 PM
Dakota Williams
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I me my
I watch myself sigh-
you leave no room for me
my tears comfort each other in exploited agony
I me my
I see nothing in the sky
You don't ever notice me
My love for you is a soul bleed
I me my
If I reach out for the twentieth time
would I become closer to your silence
or closer to my sigh?
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