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7/26/2012 1:44:21 AM
Luis Martinez-Rivera
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A Gilded Staircase
Misconception of rooms,
assumptions-
appear desolate,
yet full of mystery.
Seen through eyes,
perception or deception.
Lustrous dreams,
dreary reality,
hidden.
A gilded staircase.
Brimming with hope,
glimmer of despair.
Gilded staircase,
foundation made,
hope on the side-
A Cellar Door.
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7/26/2012 7:58:51 PM
Luis Martinez-Rivera
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Thank you, the narrator is attempting to draw in the reader and allow thier imagination to more or less run wild.
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