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7/26/2012 1:44:21 AM

Luis Martinez-Rivera
Posts: 5
A Gilded Staircase

Misconception of rooms,
appear desolate,
yet full of mystery.

Seen through eyes,
perception or deception.

Lustrous dreams,
dreary reality,

A gilded staircase.

Brimming with hope,
glimmer of despair.

Gilded staircase,
foundation made,
hope on the side-

A Cellar Door.
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7/26/2012 7:13:32 PM

hi...loved your poem it was so descriptive and painted a very nice pitcure.
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7/26/2012 7:58:51 PM

Luis Martinez-Rivera
Posts: 5
Thank you, the narrator is attempting to draw in the reader and allow thier imagination to more or less run wild.
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