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3/17/2024 1:41:29 AM
Ryan Blackborough
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She's a goddess, true poetry in motion.
The kind that has you sacrificing yourself in devotion.
Hypnotised, I move her sway.
With no question of acceptance, live to dance in her ballet.
I found a light, a beacon of perfection.
Then once I'm at worst I find it's lies and misdirection.
edited by surpriseguest on 3/17/2024
edited by surpriseguest on 3/17/2024
edited by surpriseguest on 3/17/2024
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