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7/20/2012 12:54:19 PM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133

Wish I was your addiction,
Upon a star non fiction,
never ending hole so deep,
Life would seem more complete

If you'd wake up,
crack open my bedroom door,
To think you'd been dreaming about me,
God gave you everything you need andmore,
What I'd give to feel those arms hug me,
genuinely, honestly, no lovewithholding

If I was your vice,
I would be the answer to your stress,
Of all else you try,
I'd always bring out the best,
You'd spend time with me ,
defend me to the end,
You'd be incredibly loyal,
I'd consider you my best friend

No recovery program could treat,
the connection we'd share no one coulddefeat,
You'd need to see my all the time,
reminders of me everywhere, like alittle shrine,

Wish I was your addiction,
Upon a star non fiction
never ending hole so deep,
Life would seem more complete

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