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2/19/2024 6:52:21 PM

Julia Thomas-Ficken
Posts: 17
The Great IAM


After He hangs each star each night,
He allows the moon to come out & play.
Concise & just as constant,
He sends the sun to start each day.
Faithful, patient & forgiving,
He waits for us to say;;
That we need His Grace, His mercy,
That we want Him to show us His way.
In our joy or in our sorrow,
Today, tomorrow come what may.
God He is, was & always will be.
His love for us won't fade away.
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4/3/2024 8:40:38 PM

Michelle Smith
Posts: 12
Amen. All glory be to the Father, and to the Son, and to the Holy Spirit! As it was in the beginning, is now, and every shall be;; world without end! Amen.
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