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2/15/2024 9:54:54 AM

NANA YAW
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My love for you shines ever bright,
In the soft glow of valentine’s light.
With every star, I whisper your name,
Hoping our love will forever remain.

With roses red and chocolates sweet,
I lay my heart at your feet,
For in your eyes, I see my fate,
A lover so pure, strong and great.

Will you be my valentine?
And forever my sunshine?
For in your love, I find my home.
With you, I’ll never roam.

So let my words convey my wish,
To be with you, to never tire,
For with you, CJ, is where I belong,
In your arms, where love is strong.

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