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Mission statement: I don’t use AI to generate or even tweak my poetry, because I am a better poet than it.

 

Poetry has been my passion since my retirement from an accountancy based career a dozen years ago. I currently live in South Africa and this rainbow nation has inspired many of my poems. I also have British nationality and embrace their grammar and spelling, but I read widely and am not fazed by strict grammar rules: A pavement/sidewalk; glasses/eyeglasses; judgement/judgment, et cetera; they are one and the same to me when I read poetry. To date, I have self-published a number of books, including the poetry anthology by international poets, © Time, 2014 ISBN 978-0-620-60578-6, and have been cited in many international publications, both poetry journals, as well as in scholarly handbooks. Some of my short stories have been published in international electronic publications, and one of my novellas had been short-listed for an Afrikaans SA publication.

I serve on the Board of Advisers, of Taleemi Baithak.

I have a number (14 to date) poetic forms to my credit, notably, Suzette Prime, 2012 (listed here on PoetrySoup under Types of Poems), as well as The Tesla 3-6-9, 2017, and Suzcrostic, 2021 (listed under New Poetic Forms here on PoetrySoup), Suzette sonnet (Suznet), 2023 - introduced via an article here at PoetrySoup, as well as the brand new Suzette Swan Arc, 3  April 2025. These all resist AI imitation.

My most recent books which include examples of my poetry as well as notes regarding poetry - available directly from me:

  1. © The Eutony of Words, 2018 ISBN 978-0-6399382-0-2
  2. © Docendo discimus, 2021 (Revised 2023) ISBN 978-0-620-95432-7
  3. © Flight of Thoughts, 2023 ISBN 978-0-6397-8880-7
  4. © Downtown - Poetic Devices, 2023 ISBN 978-0-7961-1968-1
  5.  © Rocking Poetry, 2033 ISBN 978-0-7961-2824-9
  6. NEW: moonwake - Suzette Prime poetry, ISBN 978-1-0370-1836-7(PDF). It is a collection of 61 Suzette Prime poetry spanning from 2012 (when I designed the poetic form), up till now.

Back when tigers used to smoke

Blog Posted:8/25/2024 12:26:00 AM

Back when tigers used to smoke, by Suzette Richards – image generated 25/8/2024

 

We are more accustomed to the opening lines ‘Once upon a time’ employed in fairytales. The difference between a fairytale and fantasy: A fantasy has a focus on the development of a different world and systems or magic, while a fairytale simply assumes that magic exists and is set in our world or a facsimile equivalent to it.

Many (not all) Korean folktales begin with the phrase ‘Back when tigers used to smoke’ which sets a whimsical tone for the story; while others do employ the well-known phrase ‘Once upon a time’ or an equivalent. This expression is unique to Korean storytelling and has a playful element to it.  It reflects the cultural significance of tigers in Korean folklore, symbolising strength and power.

There are various options open to the poet to introduce and set the stage for a fantastical tale. Percy Bysshe Shelley begins his poem, Ozymandias (1818), with: ‘I met a traveller from an antique land /  Who said:’, which in effect mimics the ‘Once upon a time’ phrase. Ozymandias is the Greek name for the Egyptian king, Ramesses II. He was famous for the number of architectural structure and his own statue he has created during his ruling period. Shelly by knowing the shattered condition of the statue wrote this poem to convey a moral that powerful people and their power is only temporary. It is loosely based on the sonnet form.

 

OZYMANDIAS, by Percy Bysshe Shelley

I met a traveller from an antique land

Who said: “Two vast and trunkless legs of stone

Stand in the desert…Near them, on the sand,

Half sunk, a shattered village lies, whose frown,

And wrinkled lip, and sneer of command,

Tell that its sculptor well passion read

Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,

The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed:

And on the pedestal these words appear:

‘My name is Ozymandian, king of Kings:

Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!’

Nothing beside remain. Round and decay

Of the colossal wreck, boundless and bare

The lone and level sands stretch far away.”

 

What unique introduction to a poem would you employ to substitute the phrase: ‘Once upon a time’?

Happy quills!

Suzette



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Suzette, great blog, Constance
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Date: 8/25/2024 9:59:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this Suzette, I've never heard the line "Back when tigers used to smoke" and never really thought of the cultural differences in colloquial story-telling devices. I've also never really thought of the difference between "fantasy" and "fairy-tale", and I will definitely always remember this delineation; you're an excellent teacher! Not that it matters, but Ozymandias is my favorite poem and I think it would be neat to hold a contest for the most creative substitute phrase for "Once Upon a Time."...Twice Upon a Space?
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Date: 8/25/2024 12:00:00 PM
Ah, I will add it to my list of prospective contests. Thank you for the vote of confidence, Joe. :)

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